Monday, 29 October 2018
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You described who Casey Kopua was really well. You missed out your definition of what a virtue is and Three virtues that your hero showed/displayed and there was a spelling error in the first page. Other then that you got all the other things ticked and that's why I would grade your work at relational. I really enjoyed reading your essay on your Famous New Zealand Hero.
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